Constructive Feedback Friday

It's I Heart faces Constructive Feedback Friday!

original

my edit

Took this at a local Orchard. I entered it in the photo contest there and I'll find out this week if I won anything. I really love the photo, but I just can't seem to get it right. Help!

**update**

Sara emailed me her crop...here it is!

For the original SOOC on Flickr go here.